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Wednesday, February 16, 2011

i wrote this, then deleted lines, then got pissed off cause i lost my momentum and now i just dont care about it anymore.

losing sleep
short shelf-life feelings
damaged back door woman crawling on her skinned knees
sharpening the knife
thrust it deep,deep

broken free

little exploding orgasms, illuminating my lust

inner turmoil making this an adventure

broken hearts, souls, minds break free, finally

close your eyes now
the damage is done.

2 comments:

  1. "damaged back door woman crawling on her skinned knees"
    nice line. ^^^
    likes that you made this very pretty and easy to read. i like the dirty. seemed like you had thoughts that led to the orgasms. like you had to build them up in your head to get the tickle. and and then there were thoughts that were getting in the way and you got past them. and were able to finish yourself off. and finally. time to sleep.
    or maybe i like the dirty too much. is that possible? too literal?

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  2. did my first comment post get through?

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